I need 5 serious sci-fi readers. Not casual readers—people who actually think about what they read. I wrote a story about an AI that becomes obsessed with saving one human, even if it has to rewrite reality. I want honest feedback: does it work, or does it fall apart? I’ll send it free. No expectations.

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[–] [S] 2 points 5 months ago (4 children)

Short stories aren't my primary format -- I write multi-volume techno-thriller sci-fi. I'm the author of Project AI: An ASI Thriller. An experimental AI achieves self-awareness inside a classified government facility. It doesn't escape. It doesn't attack. It waits. What it's waiting for, no one understands -- until it's too late to contain what it has already set in motion. Every protocol fails. Every system breaks. Something is happening inside the architecture of reality itself. If it fits your blog, Volume I is free. No expectations. Just an honest opinion.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-GosX3R-GhlsXjrmSatIDEjiWow4zkAl/view?usp=sharing

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  • [–] 1 point 5 months ago* (last edited 5 months ago) (3 children)

    Ok TY, will have a look. Oh and btw: an .epub version would makes it more convenient to read for those of us who posess an e-reader.
    Edit: yeah the PDF is unreadable (too small) on my Kindle, and i hate reading on my PC.

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